This article talks about what might happen in the future with weed businesses. People are starting to like weed more and want it to be allowed everywhere. The people who sell weed have had a hard time because of a big sickness, but now things are getting better. Some big companies bought smaller ones and some rules changed for them. Read from source...
1. The first paragraph seems to be written as a summary of the year 2024 for the cannabis industry, but it does not provide any specific or factual information about what happened in that year. It only mentions some general trends and events that could have occurred in the previous years or are expected to happen in the future. For example, the sentence "It was the year the world finally bloomed into a post-pandemic era" is vague and does not explain how the cannabis industry benefited from the post-pandemic situation. Similarly, the sentence "For the businesses that survived, the market did get tougher and more competitive than ever" does not provide any evidence or examples of how the market conditions changed or affected the cannabis industry. Therefore, this paragraph lacks credibility and substance.
2. The second paragraph starts with a vague statement "A lot went down this year for the cannabis industry." This phrase is too broad and does not convey any specific information about what happened in that year. It also implies that the author did not do enough research or analysis of the events and trends that occurred in the cannabis industry in 2024. The paragraph then mentions some examples of acquisitions, mergers, and partnerships that took place in the cannabis industry in 2024. However, these examples are not well-explained or supported by any data or sources. For example, the sentence "Also, polls reflected a growing support among Americans for cannabis legalization" is based on an assumption and does not provide any evidence or citation of the polls or surveys that showed this trend. Therefore, this paragraph also lacks credibility and substance.